This has come such a long way Christina! Having the storybook theme was a great idea, and it goes with your video well. I also like how you kept with the video's color scheme. It really strengthens it. The only thing I would work on is the base of the architecture on the book. It kind of looks like it was just stuck in on top, so if you played with the lighting and shadows a bit to make it looks like it's actually sitting on the book it wouldn't be as distracting. Other than that, it's fantastic!
Oh wow! I love this Christina! The concept is really great, and the building turned out really cool. I think it could use a few touch-ups here and there. Some of the proportions on the building look a little stretched, but for the most part I like it and I think it turned out well.
Christina, I love where you took this. Very nice. Come see me before you print I have a few ideas for you for polishing it off.