I need to work on the post and obviously get a better picture (I'm embarrassed) but I have the Chris Brown "Forever" Video and the Colosseum for my influences. I am going to add more to my little stadium seating so that it reflects the columns. This was pretty fun. I want to put a gray background on it so the carpet and the wall match. Ideas for the layout of the poster would be awesome!
I like this a lot. You did a really good job combining these two ideas, considering how different they are. I especially like the crumbling pillar. My one concern is the iPhone, it seems to be just floating there. I have a photoshop file of the iPhone if you would like to use it.
I love the layout of your room, it feels unconventional and very theatrical. The iPhone could be blended into the room a little better, but I'm sure Jay or someone can help you with that! I think as far as the ad goes, the only part that I don't like is the iphone logo in the upper left corner. It doesn't feel like it goes with the rest of the ad, it feels more like a required element that was stuck there in the corner. I would try getting it to fit in with the ad copy in the bottom right, maybe. Same style or placement, something like that.
I like this a lot. You did a really good job combining these two ideas, considering how different they are. I especially like the crumbling pillar. My one concern is the iPhone, it seems to be just floating there. I have a photoshop file of the iPhone if you would like to use it.
ReplyDeleteI love the layout of your room, it feels unconventional and very theatrical. The iPhone could be blended into the room a little better, but I'm sure Jay or someone can help you with that! I think as far as the ad goes, the only part that I don't like is the iphone logo in the upper left corner. It doesn't feel like it goes with the rest of the ad, it feels more like a required element that was stuck there in the corner. I would try getting it to fit in with the ad copy in the bottom right, maybe. Same style or placement, something like that.
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