tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-259512054054790573.post4502381921152384230..comments2012-02-22T11:18:04.370-08:00Comments on SUU Design II: Jolly Good Time with Taylor SwiftMWX Designhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05912640050567404003noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-259512054054790573.post-14015590364554589142010-04-21T13:21:04.915-07:002010-04-21T13:21:04.915-07:00Dan, it is coming along well. I also think that i...Dan, it is coming along well. I also think that if you were to hand write the content that it would tie everything together better.<br /><br />I think that there is a lot of black. I feel like if you could break up the empty space up top it would help it to feel more finished and help to polish it off. <br /><br />I really like your concept and think that it is working over all, it just needs some finishing touches here and there.joe rawlingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00319174528980020757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-259512054054790573.post-1687709849679928532010-04-20T11:51:17.753-07:002010-04-20T11:51:17.753-07:00I really like where your design is headed. I think...I really like where your design is headed. I think the colors and the marker look really good and fit with your style. I think if you hand wrote with marker the type in the top it might further make your idea more understandable to the viewer.<br /><br />Another thing I noticed was on the right side where the black meets your walls. There is a little white/gray line coming up from where the walls come together that you might want to erase out. <br /><br />Also you might try lightening up the other two purple windows on the left side to match the two bright ones in the middle. Just a thought.<br /><br />I think your two things were not super easy to meld together in a way that works and I think yours has achieved that very well. <br /><br />Great job!<br />JadeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com